tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3542629857315532237.post7339821063465125008..comments2023-09-01T13:31:13.726+02:00Comments on Rewords: New Yorker Poem by Sue Chenette (new)Sandy Florianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09165292190620145174noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3542629857315532237.post-89879762824844993692009-06-27T03:54:57.823+02:002009-06-27T03:54:57.823+02:00I didn't change any of the lines, but I did pl...I didn't change any of the lines, but I did play with the order. And in the second-last line I couldn't read my writing, wasn't sure if it was "wandering" or "wondering," chose wandering. Certainly you could do as much revising, modifying, adding as you felt like doing. Who knows, maybe I'll do more later.Sue Chenettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04630993973596202682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3542629857315532237.post-81443394685287959892009-06-27T02:42:04.601+02:002009-06-27T02:42:04.601+02:00Interesting. And then you end up with another tota...Interesting. And then you end up with another totally NYorker poem. Peculiar. Did you revise? Modify? Add afterwards?Jennifer K Dickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14819275106754521715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3542629857315532237.post-80554605830851503492009-06-26T21:38:41.609+02:002009-06-26T21:38:41.609+02:00This poem is a compilation of lines gleaned from o...This poem is a compilation of lines gleaned from old New Yorkers in the course of a poetry game where people sit around a table piled with magazines, an egg timer is set for ten minutes, and you quickly choose one line of poetry or prose (or a cartoon caption) from each issue that you pull from the pile.<br />SueSue Chenettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04630993973596202682noreply@blogger.com