Friday, November 30, 2012

Where these two sides meet, by JKD

Rewording of Erin Mouré’s “Coronal Bone Suture”—as a rescrambling of the original + small additions. Published in the now-available Lana Turner lit review, issue #5: http://www.lanaturnerjournal.com/toc-override/erin-moure-coronal-bone-suture

“I am a rabbit
wanting
in
physicality’s memory
my treasure
you,” I told her.

“But no!,” she retorted
“Words are beings
sutured.”

Sustenance abjured
this glance
stretched frontal
spacing
one comma between
each
of us.

Wanting that
pirate,
I thought, holding
out to            (for) 
her
this dismay.

1 comment:

George Vance said...

Great start! I'll try next week.