Rewording of Erin Mouré’s “Coronal
Bone Suture”—as a rescrambling of the original + small additions. Published in
the now-available Lana Turner lit review, issue #5: http://www.lanaturnerjournal.com/toc-override/erin-moure-coronal-bone-suture
“I am a rabbit
wanting
in
physicality’s memory
my treasure
you,” I told her.
“But no!,” she retorted
“Words are beings
sutured.”
Sustenance abjured
this glance
stretched frontal
spacing
one comma between
each
of us.
Wanting that
pirate,
I thought, holding
out to (for)
her
this dismay.
1 comment:
Great start! I'll try next week.
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