Showing posts with label Laura Mullen reworded. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Laura Mullen reworded. Show all posts

Thursday, April 21, 2011

She coulda stammered... (JKD)

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She coulda stammered anything, but straight-arrowed me with “Is grief porous as a pin cushion?”


After Dzina’s Needle Trading Off, with help from Laura Mullen’s PieceWork (with parts from Lisa Pasold) & Rufo Quintavalle’s Gold.

Plum outta autofills, here in her harp-sign-and-signal-less labyrinth wondering—which hole to plug, which gap or griffon clawed into the gaffaw? I could not laugh dark enough to get the bile up outta here, her heralding a blind center, a hokypoke stem of a tendril choke-hold. I was watching, waiting, wandering round the gate thinking whichever one of us gets pricked— could be a rhetorical ring to pattern the trap not to speak (to), see, know, how to pin the tail on. Or sigh. Her yodle. Then a yammerin’ clamour whatchr lookn at cephalothorax? The lick of her neck, a candlestick. I got to wonderin’, what’s it take?, or, to break? Hand to trace-lace-bind, center stuff, staple, stroke. You’d a known it was me, my folded grammar, tattletale forgotten, coat in the wind, wishing for a chintz dress glitzy nightshift. Echo of who’s got the dropsy? Betcha she could take us all in that hopscotch match. This crash course six shooter hold up drawback to kick is just a mishmash of watchnknow? wouldchanow? Whodunbeenit? There, where I cut back the years, say “go to pieces”. The patched bleedwork, box leftbehind of yellows. I suppose, had she a forwarding address, past this advent advantageous calendar’s seasonal greeting, I would have been a taker. No. No no more. As she wrote it: “Seems a seams been lying in the wait, lined up ahead, flagging the signless poledancer back down under us.” Sure, I mighta responded, cause after all it seems I never could stop that automatic capitalization from defining time. And yes, lady, it really is someone else's turn. Uh-huh. So, blathering up the foam in the fountain, the vanilla or bubbly eucalyptus, round the bend, to turn then turn again to come, enfin, to a pause, a price, a plate platter onto which I give her over. And will you take care of her? Heel, hell, howl now don’ com’n back, ‘k? Y’hear? Breaks me a bone, deep as marrow exposed syntax, to know the direction that dart was heading. Nothing more to do but whine, whinny, whimper, whistle. A happy tune? Or a harp? The needle was pointing due West. Shoulda followed it.

Monday, March 21, 2011

needle trading off (grief is good)

>>>"Piece Work" (Laura Mullen>>>LisaP, JKD) &
>>>"Gold" (RQ)

porous pin cushion plum outta autofills
which hole to plug, which’n gets pricked,
it’s a rhetorical o ring dummy pattern
shit trap not to speak (to), see, know
whatchr lookn at cephalothorax pin the tail
yumdummie like child candieneck
lace blind center stuffed stapled bloke
hokeypoke folded fold it’s a it’s a
it’s a hopskotch, watchnknow where
yr toes go, patch pieces, bleedwork
which box to stick, which ball to kick
one up one down open close frontward
fwhap! black right leftbehind yellow
nomo advent advantageous calendar
seasoned f'n greedy taker no no no more 
seams line up ahead flaggn signless to
stop automatic capitalization defining
default autopilot muslin itchy dressie
bessie once upon a bassackwards time
(scratch/   balls)     
bun(ga) bun(ga) lady
it's someone else's turn.

Saturday, August 14, 2010

The Hour of Ecanus, by JKD

After Laura Mullen's Piece Work and Tony Jolley's Sleeve & Air, and My Father's Son

Deep in the bone
wings
black mist
dimly alight
just a memory
not the forearm I remember
nor flesh
stripped back to that barest
use, the word
spacing unteneted
correct grazing
the air out at each deep marked edge
this effort
set
stark stripped to joint
near the present event

dream’s static
appears out of scapula
to find afloat
on air
the feel of time
rooting
vines sprouts veins
cover her body
in a downy velour
here, green
like early feathers
over her
surfacing
the whirring machine
fabric dusted
lack
of masks
of flight

phrases’ slip
speaking each to each
set into leaving
bereaved
soon
roots, identity
earth
drop away
a glancing as if words
licked into arcs
lyric
space or expunged records
withered
into was, and where
arctic and anthropomorphic
dispersing
recollection in the bone


Thursday, April 8, 2010

I've an urge to talk to you by JW

After Laura Mullen's "I've an urge to say I miss you, but I don't know who I'm talking to." from the Bride Journal video post on her blog afterIwasdead


"I've an urge to talk to you", you say. "But Miss I, I don't know who I'm
talking to Miss... but, I've an urge too". You say: "I, I don't know who I'm
missing". I urge you to say who I am. Aye, I have to know. But don't talk
to talk. To urge. I say: "I've missed you, but I don't know who I am."

"I don't know who I am, but I've missed you", I say. To talk. To urge.
But have I? I don't know. Aye, I urge you to talk: to say who I'm missing.
"I don't know who you're missing." But I say: "I, I've an urge to talk to
I-don't-know-who Miss." And you say: "Aye, I, I've an urge to talk too."

Monday, September 14, 2009

Medusa, by Jennifer K Dick

After Laura Mullen’s Cituated, Sean Standish’s new poem Geese and Poles, and the poemNeighborby Brandon Shimoda (remember, to read poems this one is after, just click their titles!!)



Where might she now? Drifting.

Inside her sensorium, the waterline’s sail-drenched inward swoop and scatter of will distanced and provincial

daydream.

This part danger, part reason desperate.

Solitary. Stolen.

Classically bridging into the assumption of anemic winters, women men longed for, men longed for women longing for women she is dreaming there, glassily, setting ahoy, ahail, below the aft side slipping silent below the glacier blueice slipping splinter into

Scythes scaling away fields out of reach of

Breath. As aquatic.

Dangerous parting of sleep. Here. Heal. Knee, or set strap over shoulders: only to part, only to make it

Firmly, mark her.

She is the lack of control, in release she is puppet stringlifted. Turn in on itself slowly. Gazed. Saying adieu meaning something hollow. Nightsweats pressed against lucid dreaming. Inert
day

flat angled

White, star-speckled skin in the obsidian depths, beyond the unseeing predators, the rays, the gauzey curtain. If she could last out there, beyond that

delicacy of the return

into her.

Mouthing words in the silent sleep beyond the wall of outbound REM cycles. the weight of a body bending, rent, peared upon a moistened sail when, in an effort to say echo, to say oh, a gadget’s missing.

metal, the Aegean’s obelisk or

lead mirrors drowning, anchor-heavy, as stone.