Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Our rented reality is a problem, by JKD

After On the Multiplicitous Poetries of Lee Ann Brown by Laynie Browne
(an exercise in filtering and revision)


Angles
simultaneous noise
hide the woods
into.
Remember?
Trillium,
“Crush”
wearing away.
Which goldenrod
registered level?
Phenomenological:
rings of
that discourse.
A path (arterial)
to or from.
Measured phonemes.
Event notions
stillbirths to negate
mere accumulation.
She does not write
because.
Linguistics, recollection
of the poem as.
Not because
before
they happen.
She.
To place to this beep.
Altercation.
Is it
a planetary structure
by means of language.
The Southern city?

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