A variant and reversal of Lisa Pasold’s Snow Squall
the trick with being constant, like weather,
is to tromp downstreet watching some dog-owner instead
of being part of a Sunday carnival of bare limbs,
footprints on the frontwalk, to recognize
in frosted glass panes, a bevel of ice, standing
before the white window, the duvet pulled tight
while in the driveway (everytime, it’d bleed if it could)
the struck stone and bleeting snowplow backing up
hazel-eyed, the morning curling white
doubled-over like angels waking in snow
Tuesday poem #664 : Dani Spinosa : House
4 days ago

2 comments:
"A Sunday carnival of bare limbs," wonderful! Thank you for your poems and the lovely comment. I love coming to rewords and reading your poems. The whole idea of these abstract adaptations is marvelous.
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