Friday, June 6, 2008

after after a train passing by jill d.

after missings by jkd after cull by sean s.

a train on fire catching
cascades [falling falling turning over]
like monsters in demise [plummeting or blown apart]
cascades pragmatic
and nutritious
moving across countrysides
lean left
toward a sun temple
[monsters blown apart] [a hero approaches from the horizon]
writhing [suntemple][fire]
caskets mildew in the mist
hero jumping the train
shattered seats
writhing luggage
[fire and demise] [plummeting] [at high speed]

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