by jill d. after sean s. how to write
you are telling me
hanging over
seething
or glare
i dislike
i disagree
you firm unspeaking
each letter
un-mattering
doing other than what
matters
seething
or a fierce
impulse
(not)articulated
each (un)word
(not spoken)
fierce quiet covering
like a blanket of
(the insane mumble a search
for balance
or listening
to the unsaid)
covering
each
beat
Monday, June 30, 2008
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1 comment:
Fiesty, lovely, fiery response to Sean's poem, getting at, undigging language. I like how you have been using parentheses in your recent rewordings, too, the variable ways they add or can be heard as a second undervoice of your texts.
Thanks for a great read!
Jen
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