after 'Sunday' by Sawako Nakayasu
Put another chimp on the grill,
the pansies you planted in the
rock garden are doing fine,
time to kick back and enjoy
the clouds like soggy pancakes
hogging the sky
..................I once had a friend
whose head was all woolly, hadn't
a clue which way was what
................................ended
up under the lake and it's ebony
sporadic, rainy-morning waves
and then there was that lady
went awry,
..............her teeth gone, living
off her daughter's hand-fed 'nanas
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2 comments:
Hey Rufo, I was reading Jill Darling's reversal of Sawako's piece and wondered what yours would read like in reverse order, or in reverse line order. It is interesting, so thought I would mention it to you! Best, Jen
her daughter's hand-fed
teeth gone
awry,
that lady
sporadic, waves
the ebony
ended
clue
hogging
the pancakes
doing fine,
you planted
another chimp on the grill
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